Thing coming along

I've been on and off this for the past couple months..not sure about it. I don't think its a final yet either.

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i like the part with the sorta strings @ 1:57 gives some more intensity, like something's gonna happen... maybe.

i think you should add some things, melodic synths, faster or heavier beats, the mood is nice but it doesn't really go anywhere, it just lacks intensity towards the end if you ask me. a sort of progression would be nice. well that's what i would do.

i really like this but i think it builds too quickly

if you padded it out (with good ideas) it would have a more comfortable pace

also i'm not sure about some of the choices you made on the percussion

that cuica sound and either a tape stop or reverser effect you used in there

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I agree with both of your comments, they help! Ill get to reworking this more.