some noodling IDM

it has its moments...

let me know your thoughts.

cheers,

eric

i think this was a bit too noodly for me

you'll laugh but i wished it had a hook

I liked the all of the elements of this, but to me it lacked structure, I got a bit lost listening to it, in some parts the drums sounded a little random. I'm not sure how deliberate that is, as you've said its definately noodley.

Although only listening on headphones (hd25s) it sounded quite well mixed down. with a bit more structure & progression, and something distinctive (a more recognisable/memorable riff or drum pattern) I think this could be a really nice track :)

your thoughts echo mine... the song definitely lacks structure. any particular portions of it that could/should be removed, or portions that could be repeated to add more structure?

i got lost in building too many sounds for this one and didn't really think much about structure.

the drum pattern has 3 major changes... but after the fact i went in and edited each bar so that there is not 1 pattern (apart from a couple of places) that repeats the same pattern. may have been overkill.

thanks much, both of your, for the listens and feedback.

cheers,

eric

liked it, drums didn't sound random to me, liked the sounds and overall production.

i liked the melodies and synth sounds i think you shoulda used more electronic drums instead of acoustic though

thanks all, for the listens and the feedback.

have to give some of the recent posts a listen... been busy as heck lately with a move a loads of real person work.

yan_g, i've got your demo downloaded and am definitely going to give that a listen.

cheers all.

-eric