first track I'm happy with

I'm not sure what the 'etiquette' is on this forum so I hope people don't mind me posting a track after only a couple of reviews :)

This is the first tune I've made that I'm happy enough with not to abandon it halfway through (and to show people other than my friends!) I think the levels/eq might be a bit off because I haven't been able to listen to this much on speakers :(

Let me know what you think or how I can improve it, even if you think its shit!

thanks

(cc by-nc-sa if anyone cares)

i like this track, it has a nice thoughtful mood

don't be afraid to share unfinished tracks

that's what we're here for