A Few Songs To Share -- Feedback Please!!

So after years of working on music, I think my work has finally yielded a few tunes that could possibly be finished. Being such a perfectionist, I can never accurately judge my music, and figured this would be a good place to get some criticism, as opposed to just showing friends and getting the whole "ah thats tight man" shit.

But anyway, I'm attaching three songs. The last one I still think I can add on to. Also, all three I think could potentially benefit from better mixing, but here goes:

Thanks for the feedback ahead of time!

By the way, I almost never title my songs, except for that first one "welting the max," so if anyone has ideas for song titles- throw em out there!

EDIT: Guess I can't go over the 20mb limit even in a different post or thread? fuck...

Hi. I liked the first one - specifically because it wasn't overproduced, it was really relaxing, however by the end i was hoping for some sort of variation in the percussion. Still good though.

I loved the second one, it's going straight in my music-from-watmm folder

  Amen Warrior said:

Hi. I liked the first one - specifically because it wasn't overproduced, it was really relaxing, however by the end i was hoping for some sort of variation in the percussion. Still good though.

 

I loved the second one, it's going straight in my music-from-watmm folder

Thanks a ton, glad you liked it!

and again, these songs arent necessarily done, so I think I will go back and add some more variation in the first one.

its nice. i like the beat in welting the max. maybe add some realtime modulation to the bleepy synths rather than vary up the drums as someone else said. i like its relentlessness.

2nd one is very nice too. maybe drums could be a bit louder though i quite like how the synth mids and highs are quite overpowering. hypnotic

i like

weltingthemax 2ii: i like the sound in the snare's place. i think the fadeout at the end is too long.

jamii: takes a long time to get going imo. it is kind of aimlessly pretty but didn't satisfy my need for substance.

i like jamII - nice textures and chords - but it does feel like a jam in that it lacks structure. could be way more effective with some more defined form, adding/subtracting layers, changing up the flow, etc.

thanks for posting! post more when you can [: