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Working through a breakup, every time I go to work on music something like this comes out.

 

www.room203.net/pipefist/geton.mp3

www.room203.net/pipefist/roadtrip.mp3

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www.headfoam.net/roadtrip.mp3

www.headfoam.net/geton.mp3

 

oops, messed up the links

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The Roadtrip link doesn't work.

 

Geton: Love the intro, very Jan Jelinek-ish... yet darker.

Drums are too loud, they destroy the power of the beautiful rhodes. In fact I think I'd change the drums into something a lot more minimalistic, because the ones you've used just seem to powerful compared to the relaxed feeling the track represents in the intro.

Wow, nice trumpet.

 

It could use a bit of more work on the arrangement. It needs a break where the rhodes gets to do its magic all by itself without being interrupted by anything.

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oops again

 

http://www.beneboi.headfoam.net/roadtrip.mp3

 

thanks for the feedback squee, i agree about the drums overpowering everything, ill work on it

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Ah, Roadtrip is splendid as well. Maybe it's just me and the way I usually arrange my tracks, but I'd like to hear a longer intro without the drums but bass, rhodes (I believe that's I rhodes I'm hearing), and strings only.

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You rock my world, lovin' this stuff.

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  On 6/17/2017 at 12:33 PM, MIXL2 said:

this dan c guy seems like a fucking asshole
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Geton sounds slick! The beats are not too loud by any means. If anything they could stand to be louder, but it sounds fine as it is. Lovin' the rotary organs, and the gradual incorperation of extra percussives. Well, the couple times it happens... it's just the right amount of something at the right time.

 

roadtrip's sounding pretty sexy too. It has a rainy vibe to it. You've really got the whole sound collage thing down. It all flows together really nicely.

 

Great tracks -no suggestions whatsoever. It all sounds as it should to me.

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