Chipped Away

I'm writing this as I'm listening.

I really like the intro. Great athmosphere!

Not so keen on the drums. I like the fact that they're so cut-up, but... I don't know? They could use a bit of work since they don't really evolve.

The high pitched synth plays some false notes a couple of times - or perhaps the tones aren't intact with the rest of the synths/pads.

Actually, the only thing that annoys me is the drums, because this is a rather chilled tracks, and it's as if the drums are living a life of their own.

You should slow the whole thing down, remove the beat, and add a killer sub bass line. A bass line so deep that I cream my pants.

  Squee said:

I'm writing this as I'm listening.

 

I really like the intro. Great athmosphere!

Not so keen on the drums. I like the fact that they're so cut-up, but... I don't know? They could use a bit of work since they don't really evolve.

The high pitched synth plays some false notes a couple of times - or perhaps the tones aren't intact with the rest of the synths/pads.

Actually, the only thing that annoys me is the drums, because this is a rather chilled tracks, and it's as if the drums are living a life of their own.

 

You should slow the whole thing down, remove the beat, and add a killer sub bass line. A bass line so deep that I cream my pants.

thanks for the critique. you dont even know how long i thought to myself about how terrible the drums are, so i definitely agree there. i use renoise almost exclusively and the drums always end up sounding robotic as fuck. ill work on it

The drums aren't terrible, but they don't do the rest of the track justice

the drums aren't that bad, good groove, the whole song is just a groove really, nice,maybe needs some developement or something other melodically

i agree with Jaffa, it needs development