brian trageskin Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 feedback is appreciated! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braintree Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 You should expand your sound palette. Don't just use the same five drum sounds. Vary the hihats and snares. Also, melodies are a good idea. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Braintree's signature Hide all signatures colindyer.bandcamp.com williamsbraintree.bandcamp.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-806305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
brian trageskin Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 yeah you're right, i was thinking the same. thx for the advice! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-806311 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tamas Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 I really liked all three, mainly the first and the third one... The first one, even though the drums don't variate in terms of sounds, I still really like the way the rhythm variates (is that a word?). To me it works in the minimalist sense because I like that kind of sound, but at the same time I agree with Braintree that melodies would be nice. A second version with some nice synth sounds would work really well. The third one, I love the synths you're using, but I think adding a really deep kick drum that follows the snares would be really great, especially after that first kick drum comes in. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-807200 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest IRARI Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 i don't know, sounds like you're having fun, which is the whole point, but i didn't enjoy listening to these much Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-808879 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaffa Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 nice tracks brian, i especially enjoyed track 2 killer groove Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Jaffa's signature Hide all signatures https://thejaffakid1.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-808906 Share on other sites More sharing options...
brian trageskin Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 thx a lot for the feedback guys! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-808926 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Asterix Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 enjoyed 1 + 2, really liked the woozy synth on track 3 - what synth is that and how did you get the woozy effect? the overall sound is 'in your face' all the way through, perhaps modulate the loudness levels a bit. quiet parts would then make the loud parts sound extra loud by contrast. good work! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-808953 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fazehans Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 if they have melodies over them an they wasnt just drum beats then im sure they could be cool. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-809026 Share on other sites More sharing options...
brian trageskin Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) Asterix said: what synth is that and how did you get the woozy effect? it's just a preset from a virtual synth i pitched and modulated over in midi Edited August 30, 2008 by Brian Tregaskin Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-809050 Share on other sites More sharing options...
qnio Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 hi will download these in a moment and give my opinion Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-809060 Share on other sites More sharing options...
qnio Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 in "chelou" i was thinking all the time "when does the intro ends" :\; i like the syncopation towards the end, with the hihats. "killergroove" sounds a little too much distorted for my taste. overall, i think you nailed it with the choice of sound for the drumkit and synths, good use of reverb too. nice, uhmm, "atmosphere". it is good to make these kind of experiments to adopt a certain "texture" if you like. the next step it's to play around musically, creating melodies, etc. that i would like to hear from your tracks :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-809081 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boris Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 FOUND YOU KAREN TREGASKIN MYSPACE OWNER. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide boris's signature Hide all signatures Fred McGriff said: i would have launched my penis out of an RPG cannon and fucked her remotely from my car Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/37193-3-new-tracks/#findComment-816682 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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