anyone here want to help me

doesn't sound quite right, but i really want to get the idea to work. i'm using reaper, and i don't know the software well enough to be sure if there's any way to make the tempo changes any smoother-sounding.

i went for a mu-ziq-type melody, not quite sure if it works. really like the melody at the end though. any suggestions / insults?

Yo, i reckon it just needs a solid eq and mixdown, stop it clipping every now and then and make it a bit more shiny, pick out certain sounds.

I liked it, i did kind of wish it would stop changing though, it totally changes pretty much every 4 bar cycle.

As for insults: fuck you ya cunt.