some very unfinished tracks

if anyone can say if they hear anything good in any of this crap i'd appreciate it lots

I like arrive the mix sounds very nice.

Escape 3 was also nice your production skills are quite good.

I like the off sync feeling of way.

wow thanks for responding already, i'm still uploading the stuff

You should lo-fi up those drum sounds on MEH and maybe add some little rolls and skips.

tram 3 starts awesome you should really build on that and create a full blown track with this one

also I was thinking, you should add some really shuffled hip-hopish beats to way

on hudin, you should bring the bass up higher in the mix and add some more oomph to it

but they're your tracks, of course

that's all of them.

thanks pod. they're my tracks yea but i dunno what to do with them so ideas like that are much appreciated :)

i like meh alot

i also like escape 3, yep great drums and melodies

way is very plaidish

tram 3 is very nice and also plaidish

  tauboo said:

if anyone can say if they hear anything good in any of this crap i'd appreciate it lots

meh: meh.

escape: like!

way: nice, needs moar 303

tram3: nice!

I really like the delicate playfulness of Meh. Sounds gentle, very pleasant like rolling down a calm river of a raft or something. The only thing I didn't like was the (And forgive my lack of correct terminology) snare (?) I think it was a snare, or whatever it's fucking called. It didn't fit somehow, almost like it was trying to have a hip-hop edge when it might actually sound good just the kick drum. The pitching up on the bass at the end was god awful, but I guess that's just because it's a short unfinished piece you just ended it like that. But otherwise, quality stuff.

The snowy synth in the beginning of Arrive I don't think works that well until the other sounds are in the mix. Alone it sounds a little weak and Final Fantasy 7 snow-townish. I really like the warm pads though. It's definitely a cute tune that makes me think of snow though. The odd bass line I think stuck out a little bit, kinda grew on me though. The snare it a little jarring on this too.. I think... Overall I liked it, but only from about half way to the end. I don't think it starts too strong though.

The melody in the beginning of Escape 3 isn't too hot until the bass line kicks in around :25, then it good higher and it's fucking quality. It just gets better as the tune moves along. You have a penchant for really icy, pleasant tunes. Is it snowy where you're at? Because it's reflected in the music. If anything, with Escape 3 I say it's best at the length it is, but ending with a gentle fade on the melody or something. I dunno, I'm music dumb...

I don't like the reverb on Way too much. Also I think this one meanders a little bit. It's as if the melody and beat are from two different tunes. Overall it's the weakest so far. Not really much more I can say about it.

Today 2. Another really ice cavernish tune. The intro is a touch too long, but improves when the beat kicks in, except the clicking sound whatever it's called is. I actually think this tune could do with having no beat at all, just a gentle flowing ambient tune. This is one of those pieces of music that's trying to incite memories but I can't think what memories they are... That's a good thing! I like it!

Tram 3 didn't make too much of an impression. It doesn't really go anywhere, nothing really stands out about it. Sorry it's late and I can't think much else to say about it.

Kind of noticing a really delicate icy theme with your melodies now! Hudin is really nice, I agree with Pod about giving the bass more oomph. I think the melody needs to be a bit more prominent, and sorry for not knowing the terms for this shit, but the melody synth sound things I think need to be.. uh... bigger? If that makes sense. Sounds a little hidden away. And I don't mean louder either, they just need more of an impact.

Resist is a bit bog standard, the snipping sounds don't really add anything to it. The melody here is lacking a bit I think. Can't really say anything else, didn't do much for me this one..

Overall your tunes are good quality. Meh, Escape and Today are my favourites here and I think they should be worked on if you plan to at all. The only thing you need to add to your music now is hardcore bass drums and angry Germans.

They are all worth finishing, but they all sound a bit clean and safe. Less conventional kick, snare, etc sounds sometimes would be nice maybe to give the tracks some more tension and contrast. Same thing goes for the pads I guess.

Meh was my favourite.

thanks for the replies btw

all very useful..

i really liekd MEH, escape 3 was good aswell, defo worth finishing