First half-decent track

Hey all, been messing around with reason for a while now, and trying to work out all the kinks and get some semi-professional sounding music goin.

Here's my first fairly good track, please be brutal with criticism if possible, and i appreciate all those who take the time to check out my track.

Hmm...

It doesn't have enough variation in sundso or the drums tones. I don't know. Maybe I just don't get it, but it sounds a little bit lazy and is missing tha tlittle bit of "magic". I cant really tell you how to put that into track... it sounds like if you keep working yoiull eventually nibble off a finger and then smoke will blow out of it and your hat will stick to the ceiling when your eyes get black.

ok sorry this is a much more finalized version, may put some other layering on top and whatnot but the general premise is complete