Team Gravy Train Presents:

i am in the process of making a band called Team Gravy Train - at the moment it's just me and 2 other people who can't play any instruments - here is an early version of our first song for the internet to discuss

this hasn't been mixed properly yet so keep that in consideration while commenting

thanks

It definitely has an RDJ Album vibe to it. I think there needs to be more backround stuff happening. Little subtle chords/pads, maybe? I like the little drum dynamic changes, though. The drums were nice and simple, though I would suggest putting some compression on them [especially the snare], if you haven't already.

Not to sound over critical. I dig it, I just think it could be improved [in regard to the style].