Which version

wouldnt be surprised if no one listens as i dont come here much or review music anymore but what the fuck, ya know?

#1 Progression.mp3

#2 Progress.mp3

#2 was made first. #1 was just finished. The two songs have different vibes. you choose.

#2 i like it

#1 i dont like it

lol at the fetaisms.

anyone else? make sure yo ulisten to the whole thing as #1 completely changes in the second half. meh

1. 1st quiet part should only be like 15-20 seconds tops, screw the fade in. Then make the 2nd part the whole song seam em together a bit more. I like it.

2. Perfect as is, but...needs vocals. Lay some vocals on it or find a singer and you could have a hit :)

i like version 2, but its begging for some quick light drum stuff, maybe at cut time. especially during the break at the beginning.