Track I'm working on right now

What do I do with this ? I think it has potential, I like its mood, I'm putting it up so you can catch my tongue and tell me its shit if need be. Ideas where to go with it? Do you like the vibe of it?

mp3 went awol

yeah pretty cool dude, needs some work still so it's difficult to critizise.

what's your intention with this track? you can go anywhere still really. the sounds mesh together really well, is all I can say.

My intention in mood is drama and loss, I'll work this track out somehow, thanks Forlon, about your remix, im having problems reading the AIFF files you sent me, any chance you could send them as standard WAV files? I plan on doing it this week.

Aslong as the elements already there sound ok im happy enough, I guess it's also supposed to sound like its on an electro tip with flourishes of vitalic and Prokofiev.

ahhh shit yeah they're encoded in flac.. or is it really the aiff after decoding flac?