song i made

just tell me if its good or not, id really appreciate it. helpful criticism needed!

this is a joke right

  art school faggot said:

this is a joke right

sorry its not a joke, but ill cry if you want me to.

pix pls

to salvage this song go with sharper snares with higher volume and alot faster, dont try to make your atmosphere lead

this is worse than my music and i really do suck hard.

ITS FUCKING GREAT. really avandt garde

  AlexPallas said:

to salvage this song go with sharper snares with higher volume and alot faster, dont try to make your atmosphere lead

thanks, ill remember that. any comments on the melody/synths or anything?

btw, heres another i made

lovely stuff! kinda in the same vein as Boards Of Canada.

Keep it up.

And no reason to be in the BoC forum - moving to EKT...

  slow_this_world_down said:

  AlexPallas said:

to salvage this song go with sharper snares with higher volume and alot faster, dont try to make your atmosphere lead

 

thanks, ill remember that. any comments on the melody/synths or anything?

 

btw, heres another i made

like i said dont let your atmosphere (melody/synths) lead. that should be what is supporting your beats. redo your snares with the bass line you have. maybe switch to 808 samples and lower the volume of your melody. if you have the files in Acid Pro i'll fuck around with em.

both songs have good melody, but not enough beats to give them form.

  Archrival said:

lovely stuff! kinda in the same vein as Boards Of Canada.

 

Keep it up.

Thanks, i really appreciate it!

Sorry for the double post, but here's another i made.

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ITS FUCKING GREAT.

:D ace man. unbelievably camp, but so unashamed about it it yanks your facial into a smile-format. the second one was cool too, in a bobbly manner. just asketch at the moment though...