Guest Italic Eyeball Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Download album here: http://mediafire.com/download.php?wdxfjytlckt For assorted songs, go here: http://www.myspace.com/waldointrenchcoats Let me know what you think. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/44386-new-album-i-am-human-finished/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementia Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Headgum - Becomes too cluttered at 5:20--you've too many voices occupying the same sonic space. Try to contrast the percussion further (increase the degree of separation; higher highs, lower lows) by doubling the bass drum with the synth (not that sound specifically) that's introduced in The Rain is So Cold. You might also try to "wet" the percussion up a bit by adding a touch of reverb--I feel like this track could potentially groove really well. Splenetic Twinge - Might've worked were it not for the percussion; uninspiring. Last Autonomous Machine on Life Support - Unless you tried to rework this, I'd cut it beyond 1:15. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Dementia's signature Hide all signatures Soundcloud Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/44386-new-album-i-am-human-finished/#findComment-1004802 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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