a new written rap thingy from late last night

this is so uncomfortable

If you ask me, the lyrics are totally uninspiring, as is your delivery and production.

Maybe you should stop fucking around with these "pisstakes" and upload something with content?

and what woudl content be!?@

do i have to go all nerdcore and start deconstructing society in big words?!@

obviously i've gotta flow better i'm just tossing shit up as i go along basically

I dont really care what you rap about, but when you rap about fucking bitches and how your rapping is so great, it really just sounds like shitty 20-year old mainstream rap lyrics coming from some whitey midwesterner.

Content would be a song you actually wrote and edited, not fucking around with practice freestyles and mediocre unfinished loops.