how does this sound

http://www.sendspace.com/file/4fjazg

i can't tell. stuck with just laptop speakers at the moment, don't know if it's too loud or too soft or if the eq is a mess.

this is just a start of something i might continue with later. been in a huge slump lately and just tryin new/different stuff from my usual sound (ambient).

the eq sounds alright to me, a bit flat, but that doesnt have to be a bad thing. Definitely an interesting change of pace from your usual stuff, still has that nice organic feel to it, vaguely reminds me of susumu yokota.

Would make a nice intermission/vignette song.