A Rainy Day

A little something I've been working on for a little while.

All feedback and criticism welcome.

Greener Grass under Skies of Gray.mp3 10.56 MB · 41 downloads

that was really frakin cool

epic first post

Add variation to the drums, and try to remove and add layers as the song plays out. This is the only thing I noticed; after it got going it just seemed to be on a time-filler loop instead of continuously evolving.

The concept and production were both VERY good, the layers and sounds you use throughout the song complement themselves and the other layers amazingly. This song has tons of potential and I would work with it more - mostly by adding length, variation, and progression.