Rainbows and Vortex's and such.

Hey there,

Just asking for some opinions on something I've made recent.

track title: Rainbow Vortex

you can find it here http://www.myspace.com/fivesteppath

It should be the first track on the player.

It main synth doesn't sound too cheesy does it, ha?

This track starts out alright, but that bassline that kicks in isn't great. This track wasn't bad overall, but it have anything that I found particularly interesting.

i like it, if the main synth sounds cheesy it definitely is reminiscent of a rainbow vortex in the sunny sky

i think the bassline sounds pretty good but you should work on it a bit more, try to maybe make it progress a bit more and be just a tad bit more melodic

woobity whizzle frizzle

I liked it kind of

Haha thanks, I'll play around and see what I can do. I kind of like it how it is already but I'll see maybe I can make it better.