Unfinished track

http://soundcloud.com/earl-grey/unfinished-drumfunk-tune

www.myspace.com/earlgreyjungle

Not really posted any tunes in here for a long while now, but looking for some advice on this track i'm having some difficulty with.

Got 3 minutes in and not really sure where to take it, bit of a writers block i suppose, as if i've hit a wall and unsure of how to navigate it....

Any recommendations, likes or dislikes, things it might need and other things it can do without, all will be considered and more than appreciated

also, how do you post Soundcloud players here?

MP3

add in a new break after the vocal with more edits? (like in life without drums @ 5:00)

or stay with the break thats already there and change it up a bit (like in

anyway im surprised to read that you're not sure where to go with it, sounds to me like you knew where it was going.

i really like it so far, gj

I do enjoy the groove. I would like to hear this completed.

nice one dudes, hopefully i can finish this before Christmas

@ Thief: haven't heard of John Atterbury, will have to have a look at Outsider Records, there looks some good stuff on there