Composition for assessment..

Part of my music composition assessment..Please listen, give feedback!

obviously very SAW/avex inspired. enjoyed

thanks.i think it was bochum welt inspired .with acoustic drums .more feedback!

yeah loving the melodies

Groovy.

i love the pads, thought the drums could be beefier - maybe layer them up with another break. would like to hear the chimey sounding pattern alternate a bit more. nice production, if maybe a little thin at the bottom end - the kicks need to be punchier imo.

really nice track though...

  On 10/29/2009 at 8:41 PM, BCM said:

nice production, if maybe a little thin at the bottom end

My thoughts exactly. This needs a bassline.

A groovy bassline.