burning chrome

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burningChrome.mp3 3.29 MB · 21 downloads

im totally new to this website so not sure of protocol etc... but curious what anybody may think of this track. i am thinking of this as some kind of futuristic hip-hop instrumental. very rough yet quirky. honestly im a bit surprised that nobody has really downloaded or commented while there is so much other activity...

the fm synthesis was kinda cool, but the kick really kinda just ruined it for me. didn't like the distortion you had on there. also the track dragged on for way too long. it needed more variation. try going to some other rhythmic variation, maybe switch to a 12/8 triplet feel every once in a while, and take your chord progression up to the minor 3rd or something.

Hey man, just listened.

Was attracted by the title, Gibson's def up there as one of my favs. The kick drum bass sound and snare is pretty cool, but a bit too distorted for my taste. There's a weird clash in the bass, but maybe it's intentional. I reakon would sound cooler it was tighter, maybe roll back the distortion a bit, and compress saturate and limit some. Make it more punchy

The ambient sounds and FM are a little more fitting to the title, that kinda cyberpunk asthetic if you like, and theres a cool atmosphere. Does drag on a bit and could def use some more variation.

Could build the rythms up into a kinda industrial vibe perhaps, i reakon could be pretty cool

ya it does have a cool atmosphere. Sounds a bit repetitive though, like your just duplicating midi regions for 5 minutes w/o any variations. Drum fills would do wonders, and don't use the same pad sound too many times in a row. That makes it sound like sony acid.