hey can i get a little feedback on my music.

http://www.myspace.com/ettercap

thanks/

I kind of skipped through these tracks because they are long.

Helio-1: very nice ambient texture. The beat is a bit dry, but you'll get better at making PHATness with time and practice. Okay, it seems like you never add any more elements to this track. The pad gets a bit higher, thats a nice touch. I like the liquid-ish sounds in the end. But this certainly doesn't warrant 6 minutes. Try to condense so simple of an idea to a smaller track length.

Game Over: I actually like the simplicity of this beat. I like the vocal sample. I see you add a glitchy beat later. I like the sound you achieved through these filters. Inneresting. Wow I did not expect that beat that comes up later, the really weird, alien ish one...kudos on that. I like the syncopation going on. I see you bring it all together later on. Cool. But like I said, you can condense this to a much more shorter, manageable length.

i agree with salvatorin...

also... for game over i recommend condesing the arragement a bunch... try and introduce some sort of new element almost every bar... either mix or instrument wise

i would add a sort of noise pad like thing to the whole of game over... something you could modulate to give it a ground to work on

thanks for the tips.

hey will where have you been, they closed the planet mu forums. game over is bad ass keep em comin. also your myspace picture, are you trying to look like richard d james. peace

sup man, ive been chillin, not gettin on the net as much, but im tryin to get better with the music, yeah i saw the forum being down, i figured it was gonna happen eventually, actually ive been just really upset about a lot of stuff got a lot on my mind, im not trying to look like rdj, im just depressed and shit..

yeah i have no clue why they just shut it down as well. i was thinking that one of the sketchball forum locals went and finally killed a hooker, and they didnt want to have to have all their thread subpoenaed