The Dark Rift

ThC (The Hyperbolic Chamber) and Hypmoden - The Dark Rift

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TTiPCm7t0lE

I like what you've got, but to me it feels kind of like it's missing a main driving force. It felt like it could use another element, like a beat or a non-pad melodic line. Actually, it might be fine if one of the current elements was brought up a bit to take the lead.

Other than that, sounds pretty good.

thanks for listening

we've decided to do an entire concept album

more tracks coming soon

I love it, but Cryptowen is right, it sounds like it's about to hit another beat but then repeats, I definetly like it, but needs something a little extra.

yeah man, i can see you're progressing. keep it the fuck up.

another element WOULD be nice tho.

the follow up track includes many more instruments

we're almost done with it