Get on the Bus

My newest creation, the first I can honestly say I am completely satisfied with.

Comments/ suggestions/ criticism please?

http://soundcloud.com/metaphysical-endeavour

I had to lol at the sample, it was pretty funny.

Other than that the end might need some work. But it is a nice track.

Yeah I had a really hard time figuring out where it could go or where i wanted it to go for the last bit... and that sample was allllllll me

I thought the woodpecker kick drum didn't really fit. I like the synth that comes in after the sample, but I agree, the ending could use work.

Thanks for the input man, much appreciated.

kick is too loud -- not necessarily wrong

might benefit from some dignified compression

edit: p.s. dig the streganona house avatar

Haha, the loud kick was indeed intended to be loud, though I was thinking of maybe replacing it with something that has a bit more boom and a little less click.

And thanks for the avatar props, mate. Wish I could say I made it. Found it on a friend's hard drive.

i think the sample could use some reverb or something to make it sound less like you were hunched over your laptop talking! it goes from a really kind of dreamy alien landscape to the super dry sample with no warning! other than that, quite like the song! oh, and write a proper lead out!

*facepalm* yeah I need to save a bit o cash so I can get a decent mic, I have this shit Logitech headset that I use as both headphones and my sorry excuse for a mic.

I'll try some reverb and maybe other effects and see what I can come up with.

Real sweet ambient to that synth that comes in about 1 min, nice

pretty good, I think the kick could use less treble, make it more of a woof sound

and yes, the synth that comes in around 1:11 is great