karmakramer Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Hey so I put together this music video last two nights... basically I had a bunch of random nature/outdoor footage I shot, so I came up with this loose story of a dude who spends a day in the forest/outdoors and as he's driving back home to the city, he day dreams/gets sentimental over his experience that day. Please share criticisms, I am looking for them. Also if vimeo doesn't play smooth I would recommend downloading the file and watching it in quicktime... it really won't work at all I don't think if frames skip. Watching full screen would be ideal too, and a joint if you smoke lol http://vimeo.com/10467948 Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sidewinder Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Started to watch it but the skipping is pretty annoying...do you have to be a member to get a download option? Maybe I'm blind. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sidewinder's signature Hide all signatures last.fm | rym | my vinyl on Instagram Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280863 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 On 3/26/2010 at 11:02 PM, sidewinder said: Started to watch it but the skipping is pretty annoying...do you have to be a member to get a download option? Maybe I'm blind. Maybe, not sure... the download option should be at the bottom right Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280868 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redruth Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 (edited) such an amazing album and such a lovely trac. (i didn't experience any skipping side, are you still having an issue?) Edited July 27, 2010 by troon Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280870 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sidewinder Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Ah yes, it says login or sign up to download. I just signed up, will download at home. But I watched it twice online with the hick-ups and I like what I saw! I really like the syncing of the rain drops and other visuals with the bass. The starburst type stuff and what appeared to be HD forest footage were quite nice. I think what I liked least was in the beginning when you first see out the windshield, the glare/haze on the windshield just made it seem low-quality. Maybe too bright, not enough contrast? Similar footage later on works better when other things are layered over it, giving it a richer feel. So maybe when used alone, that footage could benefit from some brightness/contrast/saturation adjustments. Everything after the sky shot was very nice though. So maybe looking at the whole picture, some color adjustments in certain places could give the whole thing the same rich feel you experience later. Maybe that's not the goal though. Listen to me, talking like I actually know how to make videos! Great job overall. I wish it were longer. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sidewinder's signature Hide all signatures last.fm | rym | my vinyl on Instagram Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280876 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Thanks troon! On 3/26/2010 at 11:20 PM, sidewinder said: Ah yes, it says login or sign up to download. I just signed up, will download at home. But I watched it twice online with the hick-ups and I like what I saw! I really like the syncing of the rain drops and other visuals with the bass. The starburst type stuff and what appeared to be HD forest footage were quite nice. I think what I liked least was in the beginning when you first see out the windshield, the glare/haze on the windshield just made it seem low-quality. Maybe too bright, not enough contrast? Similar footage later on works better when other things are layered over it, giving it a richer feel. So maybe when used alone, that footage could benefit from some brightness/contrast/saturation adjustments. Everything after the sky shot was very nice though. So maybe looking at the whole picture, some color adjustments in certain places could give the whole thing the same rich feel you experience later. Maybe that's not the goal though. Listen to me, talking like I actually know how to make videos! Great job overall. I wish it were longer. I agree with all your critics and I tried making the opening sky shots and driving shots more contrasted, but it looks worse mainly cause the capture was just too bright originally. I then decided to just leave it so the transition to the trippy gives an even greater sense of depth. So yeah I agree that on first impression, before the beat kicks in, the video doesn't seem like its going to be all that good... at least visually. For now though its the best I could do. I actually wanted to end the video with just a driving shot of the city and sounds of the city too... to contrast the beginning with sounds of nature, but I didn't have good audio to work with... I'll probably do a re-edit, thats why I am asking for criticisms even if you liked it Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280887 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Enter a new display name Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 So well done... Is this you in the video? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280911 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 On 3/27/2010 at 12:42 AM, Enter a new display name said: So well done... Is this you in the video? Yep Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280912 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tidbit Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 boc? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280914 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redruth Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 (edited) On 3/27/2010 at 12:46 AM, karmakramer said: On 3/27/2010 at 12:42 AM, Enter a new display name said: So well done... Is this you in the video? Yep you made this? i didn't get that at first do you have plans to do any more similar pieces? Edited July 27, 2010 by troon Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280925 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 On 3/27/2010 at 1:05 AM, troon said: On 3/27/2010 at 12:46 AM, karmakramer said: On 3/27/2010 at 12:42 AM, Enter a new display name said: So well done... Is this you in the video? Yep you made this? i didn't get that at first top work!! do you have plans to do any more similar pieces? Haha, yep it was technically for a class, but I would have made it regardless. I do have plans for similar pieces, and if anyone here is actually looking for someone to make a music video for their own music, please contact me and depending on if I am into the song/your music, I would certainly be willing to collab. I've got to be into the song though otherwise the edit/video probably won't come out very well. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1280969 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chenGOD Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 hey this was pretty cool. file quality makes me wish I had a bigger screen to watch it on... Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures 백호야~~~항상에 사랑할거예요.나의 아들. Shout outs to the saracens, musulmen and celestials. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1281195 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blanket Fort Collapse Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 I swear you didn't look like that in the most recent pic thread, either way the video is really good, big ups props Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1281203 Share on other sites More sharing options...
awepittance Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 looks great, i love that im seeing lots of extremely high quality HD stuff coming from people who aren't doing this professionally, i don't really have any criticisms maybe less of the layering/fading on top of each other stuff, the photography on it's own is great Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide awepittance's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1281213 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 nice work do0d! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sneaksta303's signature Hide all signatures The Dark Tower Cycle Pplz ep The Swarm H.P. Sneakstep's Educational Tours Vol. 1 Branch Acidian - Acid's Done Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1281379 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 thanks for the comments folks! been away without internet, nice to see fellow watmmers are diggin it! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1282381 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 (edited) Updated cut, Id like to know if people like it more or less than the previous edit: nvm just listened with sound and its got a syncing problem, ill upload again in a second Edited July 9, 2010 by karmakramer Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1369604 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest futuregirlfriend Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 (edited) nm! Edited July 9, 2010 by futuregirlfriend Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1369612 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 [vimeo]13536135[/vimeo] polished complete version Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1377797 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaproy Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Some great work there. I like both versions, keep it up man! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1377828 Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmakramer Posted August 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2010 On 7/22/2010 at 11:35 AM, chaproy said: Some great work there. I like both versions, keep it up man! Gracias Heres HD youtube embed, seems like youtube plays smoother than vimeo [youtubehd]2Wi5vy45M0U[/youtubehd] Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-1387083 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neto Posted September 14, 2015 Report Share Posted September 14, 2015 why this video has disappeared from the web? I really liked it Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/54730-aleksi-per%C3%A4l%C3%A4-sentimenthol-unofficial-music-video/#findComment-2369045 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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