wip from yesterday

hai guise

http://soundcloud.com/callamoss/vincente-ramon-1-3

this one's from yesterday, really needs some work esp. on the ending but i cant get my head around right now, the moment where you put it on your mp3 player is always the moment where the music dies

+ some unfinished tracks and some house stuff frome the last couple o weeks:

http://soundcloud.com/callamoss/sets/stuff-that-will-never-be-finished

http://soundcloud.com/callamoss/sets/housey-stuff-2

c&c for everything would be very much appreciated, fire away guys

cheers, m

At first I thought the synth sounded a bit too harsh, like it needed some filtering maybe. Sounds better once more stuff gets going, though. I like that weird screechy sound around the 3:00 mark, though the transition into & out of that breakdown is rather awkward.

Whoa, the ending part is really nice. Easily the best part of the track, in my opinion. I sort of wish you had gotten to that part a lot earlier, did more with it, & maybe have some of those quieter parts come in later on.

with awkward you mean that part where everything but the bass and those quiet claps drop out and the distorted bass comes in? i think it works pretty well being quite counterintuitive and then leading out to that ending which is more or less exactly what you expect... gives the whole track some kind of feeling of direction in the end.. but what exactly annoys you?

I think. That part around 2:40. Works better on second listen, though.

Basically my main problem with the track is it feels to me a bit like three & a half minutes of lead-in that ends just as soon as it really gets going.