Guest green hausen Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 Hello my dear friends. I would like to share this song with you. It probably needs a bit more work, but this is pretty much the gist of it. It needs a title too. I would appreciate your feedback very much. tea_160.mp3 7.17 MB · 13 downloads Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/55645-song/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
4d0 Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 there's too much shit at 3:06, but besides that I have enjoyed it thanks Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide 4d0's signature Hide all signatures Support for the government is a Stockholm syndrome. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/55645-song/#findComment-1307350 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryptowen Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 Feels too much like a bunch of parts strung together to me. I think what it needs is a more prominent theme & atmosphere to hold it together. In some parts it feels like new elements are being introduced just to keep the song progressing, but they should instead feel like a natural evolution of (or meaningful counter to) what has come before. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Cryptowen's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/55645-song/#findComment-1307417 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest green hausen Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Thanks for listening. You can hear more at www.myspace.com/jacobgreenmusic if you want, but the songs up there aren't that good. Might put some newer songs up there but nobody really cares for Myspace anymore. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/55645-song/#findComment-1308201 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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