wipit

pretty sweet intro! the beat drop at 30 secs or so is reaaaaaally weak. it needs to come back with vengeance! the bass is too subdued, it feels like a grungy monster that just took a shit ton of hydrocodone. the really stabby leads that come in are pretty sweet. nice short little track. the ending is somewhere between really cool and really annoying, try toning down the volume a bit there!

more like this?^

I lowered the drum track volume a hair before the drop and raised the level a bit after. Hope that gave it the punch it needed. Ive only been making synthetic drums for a month or so, so this is as punchy as it gets for me.(im relying mostly on compression really)

I did some live tweaking on the bass to try and give it some life.

Thanks alot for the feedback man! That's the stuff i crave from this board!

Final mix! Started as an exercise in synths and i dont feel the need to take it any farther. Gonna stop while im satisfied.

Ok so i lied. I wasnt done with it. But i think everything is much punchier and i actually mixed a track for once.

http://soundcloud.com/illfly-mandog/wipit

yeah! sorry it took me so long to get back to you -- it rips now! sounds really mean, man, really mean! diggin this one.