First Track!

Hey Everybody,

So I recently got into making music on the computer and decided to join this forum because I have a friend who told me about it. I have the first track I made about finished and I want some feedback! Its...pretty much done. I might change some things later and add some stuff at one part but besides that its about finished... give me some constructive criticism!...positive feedback...negative feedback... I don't care, just lemme know what ya'll think!

-Naz-t

introtheme.mp3 2.7 MB · 17 downloads

Decent production for a first attempt at computer-based music.

yes! rhodes! lovely!

two things though, that rimshot snare is way too loud, and the whole thing is a bit repetitive, other than that though, lovely vibe.

I agree the rimshot is too loud. Bassline is really nicely done! Outro is peaceful.

What are you making music in? i.e. what sequencer?

I'd listen to that.

Definitely tweak down the volume on the rimshot. Otherwise, a nice, chill track. Sexy bassline, the melody is absolutely beautiful and quite fits my current mood.

That synth that comes in around 1:20 could probably be put off until further into the track, maybe used purely as a 15-second outro or so.

I loooove he xylophone though! I could listen to that thing all day.

Maybe bring back the melody/ bassline along with that xylophone somewhere near the end?

  On 4/30/2010 at 5:34 PM, iamabe said:

I agree the rimshot is too loud. Bassline is really nicely done! Outro is peaceful.

 

What are you making music in? i.e. what sequencer?

I am using Logic and Reason.

thanks for all the feedback guys! i'll def bring down that rimshot and and see what else i can do to make the whole thing more interesting/less repetitive. thanks again for the feedback everyone!