Subby mellowness

Hello there, I am brand spanking new to this forum. Im after some thoughts on this my latest creation::

http://www.sendspace.com/file/8kh91q

A bit unpolished I know but does it sound alright to your ears? How could it be improved?

thankyouplease.

Gurt

boom! duff link mate.

  wasps said:

boom! duff link mate.

rahly? its working alright for me. ill do another when im home again later.

another link:

http://s28.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0YP31DA...G219WMLCJGSZNGX

excellent... cleanliness... i tried it and liked it and will like it some more...

nice to hear something a little more organic on here, drifty organ and foot pedal hats... nice. simple, soporific, pleasant, liked it very much. very peaceful.

that what's there is all well mixed and balanced. its possible you could mix it with something a more overtly jazzy, maybe bring in some kind of brush snare pattern coupled with a few subtle keys for a chorus/alternate section. it just kind of starts, runs and stops and presents no challenge inasfar as structure is concerned. that's not a fault necessarily, it sounds very much as if it's a choice.

*yawns

man, i need i coffee now, put me to sleep! .)

  wasps said:

nice to hear something a little more organic on here, drifty organ and foot pedal hats... nice. simple, soporific, pleasant, liked it very much. very peaceful.

 

that what's there is all well mixed and balanced. its possible you could mix it with something a more overtly jazzy, maybe bring in some kind of brush snare pattern coupled with a few subtle keys for a chorus/alternate section. it just kind of starts, runs and stops and presents no challenge inasfar as structure is concerned. that's not a fault necessarily, it sounds very much as if it's a choice.

 

*yawns

man, i need i coffee now, put me to sleep! .)

haha glad you liked it. keeping it simple was the idea, I did want to add some more percussive snippets so I'll see if that takes me anywhere. cheers geezar