Guest clubbedtodeath Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 Afternoon all, I've been struggling to get feedback on this one; it's quite unlike anything I've ever done, and possibly not for the ears of the Cakewalk forum.. Without further ado, I give you Demon Seed (Julie C mix) Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.clubbedtodeath.net/download.php?demon-seed.mp3 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag (Download link) I'd really appreciate some comments, this is new territory for me - considered opinions always welcome! Cheers Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/56326-demon-seed-julie-c-mix/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted May 16, 2010 Report Share Posted May 16, 2010 i like the spooky pad sound, don't like the beats really - they sound a bit too thin and could do with some more oomph and punch, they're also drowned out rather by the pad when it swells - some level adjusting might be in order. the track doesn't feel finished to me, sounds like a good bed to start with, but could do with some more elements and a couple of changes imo. sorry if my review doesn't make sense - i'm incredibly hung over and can't really think straight. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide BCM's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp | Spotify | SoundCloud | Amazon | Apple Music | YouTube | YouTube Music | Deezer | Google Play Music Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/56326-demon-seed-julie-c-mix/#findComment-1326685 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest clubbedtodeath Posted May 17, 2010 Report Share Posted May 17, 2010 (edited) On 5/16/2010 at 5:28 PM, BCM said: i like the spooky pad sound, don't like the beats really - they sound a bit too thin and could do with some more oomph and punch, they're also drowned out rather by the pad when it swells - some level adjusting might be in order. You might be right; I've had some time with the drums! This is a first attempt at side-compression; clearly I need to up it a bit, and perhaps but the drums through a bit-crusher, maybe EQ the bass and top-end a bit more? I should perhaps move the drums out of the master compression too. Quote the track doesn't feel finished to me, sounds like a good bed to start with, but could do with some more elements and a couple of changes imo. You're not wrong; I've just got to decide what those elements are. I could bring out the BoC synth flute patch for Sandison-esque interjections, but I'm really trying to stay away from it. Quote sorry if my review doesn't make sense - i'm incredibly hung over and can't really think straight. Har. One day I hope to remind myself what that feels like! Cheers Edited May 17, 2010 by clubbedtodeath Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/56326-demon-seed-julie-c-mix/#findComment-1327182 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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