Guest illfly mandog Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 been workin this track for a week or so and im kinda hitting a plateau id really like some compositional input. thanks!! Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.fohdeesha.com/data/music/eric/eptrack3.mp3 Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 ...bump just lookin for some input Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1350122 Share on other sites More sharing options...
4d0 Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 (edited) 0:34-0:38 or 0:44-0:47 is out of tune for me Edited June 15, 2010 by 4d0lf Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide 4d0's signature Hide all signatures Support for the government is a Stockholm syndrome. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1350188 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 hmmm...nothing is out of key...maybe you just don't like the rhythmic placing? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1351212 Share on other sites More sharing options...
4d0 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 0:44;5-0:46;2 part of that synth doesn't fit with the rest of the track, for me maybe it's too loud Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide 4d0's signature Hide all signatures Support for the government is a Stockholm syndrome. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1351424 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Very convincing Autechre ripoff. Pleasant listen for sure. If I was you, I'd turn those talents toward something more original. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sneaksta303's signature Hide all signatures The Dark Tower Cycle Pplz ep The Swarm H.P. Sneakstep's Educational Tours Vol. 1 Branch Acidian - Acid's Done Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1351497 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 On 6/16/2010 at 6:00 AM, sneaksta303 said: Very convincing Autechre ripoff. Pleasant listen for sure. If I was you, I'd turn those talents toward something more original. LOL...understandable. Ive only been producing music since Christmas so i hsvent found my own voice yet...but im fuckin tryin hard. (they are the guys to copy though) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1351600 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Only since christmas? Wow. You got it. Anyhow, I'll give more thoughts tomorrow (well, later today). Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sneaksta303's signature Hide all signatures The Dark Tower Cycle Pplz ep The Swarm H.P. Sneakstep's Educational Tours Vol. 1 Branch Acidian - Acid's Done Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1351612 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 fuck, it's good. i really like the drums and all that chaotic stuff around them. but you obvously need to do something with melodies in the begining, they sound a bit lame imho. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1353674 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigs Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 really fantastic track. i think rather than a slow buildup, it could use a short one with a big drop. that would accentuate how awesome the percussion is a bit more! the sounds after the percussive breakdown are really fantastic, the track has an amazing atmosphere. i really started around christmas and this song blows mine away! great stuff. can i download it? also, i see a lot of autechre influence, but asides from the percussion (which could use some changing, less glitchy and more thoughtful programming) it seems pretty unique. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1355796 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 On 6/21/2010 at 9:20 AM, bigs said: really fantastic track. i think rather than a slow buildup, it could use a short one with a big drop. that would accentuate how awesome the percussion is a bit more! the sounds after the percussive breakdown are really fantastic, the track has an amazing atmosphere. i really started around christmas and this song blows mine away! great stuff. can i download it? also, i see a lot of autechre influence, but asides from the percussion (which could use some changing, less glitchy and more thoughtful programming) it seems pretty unique. Thanks alot man!! The track is not yet finished so there is no dl. sry. Im putting together an Ep soon to be out for free dl, and ill post it here. :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/57014-nasty-nasty-nasty/#findComment-1355802 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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