More of an Ambient direction

I might be borderline spamming the YLC forum at this stage. But I seem to have loads of will power lately and sure I best use it while its there cause it wont be for long.

Ill be definitely making some changes to this track, I kinda wanna make it longer? Make it flow a bit more too, how might I do that?

Feedback much appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/anflec/square-ambient

This track has potential though i like other your tracks better. Now it's obviously too long or lacks action. For 3.42 there must be something more imho. I would add some weird random noises in side or with random pan. Also that short pad which comes 0.50 could mutate to something interesting in the end. Personally I would make it more mutating and changing so at the end it won't be same like in the begining.

The atmosphere is very engrossing, but I would add another layer to make up for the empty parts between the chords. Otherwise, that track is a success.

  On 6/12/2010 at 10:36 PM, Enter a new display name said:

The atmosphere is very engrossing, but I would add another layer to make up for the empty parts between the chords. Otherwise, that track is a success.

yeah, that's fair. I'd say the same thing. Nice one man.

very guinness

Beautiful track, great atmosphere. Perfect for my mood right now, as well.

EDIT: as to changes, like was mentioned earlier, maybe some random noises thrown in with random panning, that would definitely work well if they were at low volume with some reverb.

Pretty minimal, but it works well. Theme song to a bus arriving in the rain.

  On 6/12/2010 at 11:26 PM, sneaksta303 said:

  On 6/12/2010 at 10:36 PM, Enter a new display name said:

The atmosphere is very engrossing, but I would add another layer to make up for the empty parts between the chords. Otherwise, that track is a success.

 

yeah, that's fair. I'd say the same thing. Nice one man.

  On 6/20/2010 at 8:55 PM, bigs said:

  On 6/12/2010 at 11:26 PM, sneaksta303 said:

  On 6/12/2010 at 10:36 PM, Enter a new display name said:

The atmosphere is very engrossing, but I would add another layer to make up for the empty parts between the chords. Otherwise, that track is a success.

 

yeah, that's fair. I'd say the same thing. Nice one man.

I like the bass drum sound coming in every now and then!

Bump this with something new and quite similar.

http://soundcloud.com/anflec/room-noise

Edit: Might be a tad long.

Enter a New Display Name has just brought it to my attention that most of the tracks on my soundlcoud are of pretty low quality. So I might go back an re-encode my popular tracks in 320 and archive them.

Heres a link for "Room Noise" in 320kbps.

http://www.mediafire.com/?kjqwmwwclyg