Gimme constructive criticism on this song

A lot of the vocal loops feel kind of tacked on until they all get going & create a hypnotic sort of effect. Then they work quite well. So, I dunno. Maybe manipulate the loops a bit more in the parts where there isn't much going on. Second half feels sort of directionless.

The vocal sample loops were a bit weird but just a slight tweaking would fix em up good. The one that says "I feel" seem to drown out the rest.

But the second half is very cluttered, seems to be a lot going on in the same frequency range. Some sounds are getting masked. I have to I thought that sort of Oboe sounding melody was masking some other sounds.

Sorry if I sound negative, I really did enjoy the 1st half.

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