the washing machine nobody loved

this is the first time i've posted on here, so use plenty of lube before you ram-review my tune...

+ the melodies are nice, potential to be a nice track

– the clanking sample panned over the right gets annoying very quickly. imo, you either need to to stick it central to the mix and bring the level down so it's not as prominant, or only run it for a few bars (maybe beginning and end). the beat needs to be brought forward, or be left as is as an under layer for a more prominant break.

it's not a bad track, the potential is there for a nice drifty number, but the choice of the sounds kill it by being really flat and midified, other than the guitar which really stands out in comparison.

keep at it boss!

  wasps said:

+ the melodies are nice, potential to be a nice track

– the clanking sample panned over the right gets annoying very quickly. imo, you either need to to stick it central to the mix and bring the level down so it's not as prominant, or only run it for a few bars (maybe beginning and end). the beat needs to be brought forward, or be left as is as an under layer for a more prominant break.

 

it's not a bad track, the potential is there for a nice drifty number, but the choice of the sounds kill it by being really flat and midified, other than the guitar which really stands out in comparison.

 

keep at it boss!

you're right - listening back to it i might take the guitar out altogether, cheers mate