New Track I'm Adding Vocals To

Here's the latest track I've been working on. It's not quite finished and I'm gonna experiment with adding vocals to it. Tell me what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/android_402/hello-moon-unfinished

Get 90's Trent Reznor to sing for you.

the harp and melodies are excellent. initial percussion doesn't sit right with me, it's too harsh in the upper-mid frequencies and abit static and dry for the dreamy soundscape. bass is abit muddy.

towards the second half it gets very interesting. bass and the glitchy things are cool and I like the time sig.