Quantum-Magnitude

Hey guys, here's a track i've been working on for a while, i started writing it about 2 months ago, and just completed it in the last few days. Some feedback would be great. Thanks in advance.

http://soundcloud.com/smile060567/magnitude

any comments at all? i was trhinking of putting this on an album i'm trying to make, is it album material?

If I was you I'd put ONLY this on the Album and loop it for 4 hours.

  On 8/19/2010 at 12:34 PM, leo said:

If I was you I'd put ONLY this on the Album and loop it for 4 hours.

lol, you didn't like?

Bump, could really do with some advice guys :) thanks

sounds really out of tune

  On 8/20/2010 at 12:52 AM, bigfatLOL said:

sounds really out of tune

That might be because i haven't stuck to one key. I was going for a slightly avant garde sound, while still retaining an element of catchyness

its starts forming up towards the end but takes a long time to get there

  On 8/20/2010 at 6:57 PM, bigfatLOL said:

its starts forming up towards the end but takes a long time to get there

Yeah, i think it could do with some work on the arrangement