My new demo techno song

I've been on and off with this song for such a long time, I'm just trying to learn FL Studio..So i was randomly changing the Bass, and melodies, and this is only the demo, so its not 100% and i'm still learning ;)

Tell me what you think I should do at the end, like add another synth or keep the Kick and Bass but extra power or whatever =]

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http://soundcloud.com/basscreator/demo-song

needs glowsticks

i liked it

the bass and the lead just doesn't go well together, can't you hear it? towards the end they're all out of tune, and i doubt this has anything to do with experience, either you hear it or you don't.

you should get into this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mfSIcx1YgVE

Some nice work there, I like it.

That pause in the middle is sudden and jarring and kinda ugly. I'm a big fan of stop-starts, but that just didn't work at all for me.

As to the outro, I personally feel it should end at 3:26. That last bit of kick drum with the whoosh at the end was just kinda... meh. It would make a good transition into another track though.

i also liked the timed comments on the youtube one lol

Maybe we should slow it down by 800% and see what ambient masterpiece comes out?

Thanks for the honest opions =] But sometimes my headset getting really scratchy, so i can't hear the bass and kicks as good. And this was only a demo, I didnt fix any of the mistakes, because I just wanted to uploaded it and head to bed, but I will be working on the real thing soon =]

Look forward to hearing a finished project, man.

Me too haha

next time don't upload it until you're satisfied with it yourself

Sounds like something DJ Scot Project would have written 10 years ago, such as this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRSaHLgX8Yc

Some of my mates would have loved this sort of thing back in our crasher / gods kitchen days.