so afraid

w/ guest local vocalist, Sam...

http://soundcloud.com/acid1/so-afraid

I'd ditch the vocals, they just sound like total cheese, tune is ok.

This would be fucking excellent if it had better production. It's too rough around the edges imho, composition doesn't entirely flow, vocals are abit badly EQ'd and too centered, drums are thin.

get rid of the reverb on the voice, actually get rid of the voice, no singer is better than a bad singer but the verb makes it even worse. other than that hasn't that drilling been heard a zillion times since 1994? only gets good @ 2:40 because it does get intensity then, anger or something. am i beeing harsh? the last part before the quiet ending reminds of windowlicker in a come-to-daddy mood! like the synth of that quiet ending btw.