Probably the happiest I've been with a track in ages so please have a listen

Lately I've not been very happy with the tracks I'm making. But I do like this one I just made.

Please take a listen. Feedback is always appreciated. But comment anyway, whether you love, liked or hated it.

Thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/anflec/eden

nice

it's got a nice vibe, chass. chillaxxed.

not sure i like the drums, tho. but that's just me.

keep it up dude. :)

How did you do that drum beat at 1:29 exactly. Just trying to learn.

reminds of early warp, it lacks of something fresher, or wilder, dunno. too generic imo.

  On 8/30/2010 at 2:31 AM, mohamed said:

nice

  On 8/30/2010 at 2:32 AM, sirch said:

it's got a nice vibe, chass. chillaxxed.

not sure i like the drums, tho. but that's just me.

keep it up dude. :)

Thank you both. I think the drums need to be livened up a tad.

  On 8/30/2010 at 2:39 AM, ZiggomaticV17 said:

How did you do that drum beat at 1:29 exactly. Just trying to learn.

LOL, thats a break a found dude. No way Im that smooth a beat maker.

  On 8/30/2010 at 10:51 AM, yanG said:

reminds of early warp, it lacks of something fresher, or wilder, dunno. too generic imo.

I was thinking of compressing some stuff up. Make it more clarky.

i'd love to hear the finished version

Nice. Real chill, the break at 1:29 fits quite well, though I think the clap/snare whatever that is near the end could be softened a bit.

Heliosphan esk on that bass there!!! nice percussion it sounds extra pro.

You can be really happy with what you've created.

I like the atmosphere in the 3rd part a lot. After a while it could use an additional instrument though.

You've got a right to be happy with as it's really tasty. Like the drum programming and the general mood. Worth to keep working on!!!!

I pretty well like everything but the panning soft rhodes sounding synth that goes the repeats most of the song, the loop doesn't hypnotizing me and the tone of the synth isn't that interesting either.

really like that snare and most of the drum sounds