when it rained when i was already wet

pick your grass blade, hold in stream at curbs or creek waters flow, let it go at same time as others... run with the blades to see who wins.

this is really good

sinetronica! love sinetronica! sounds like magic. not too sure about the transitions though, they're smooth but they make the track sound like several tracks mixed together dj style, and it doesn't seem to really go anywhere. maybe each "step" should be developped more, the track lacks coherence imo. you've painted beautiful moods anyway.

smiles ... Yes, melodies are memory esk and my brain jumps from thought to thought. so the transitions are more for my coherence of how i think from the film rolling in my head ... as if this were being filmed i would cut to the perspective of the grass blade flowing toward the drain grates at the end of the stream then back to me running after the blades to see who wins. ill keep building

thanks you both