Quantum-Metalic

Hey guys and girls, here is a track i've been working on for a little while now, i feel it's complete and am thinking of putting it on my debut album, which i hope to have completed by early october. critiscims and reviews would really be a great help :) Thanks for your time

http://soundcloud.com/smile060567/metalic

I like the drums alright, feel like they should change a bit more and I like the hit sounds but the melodies really aren't that great, don't be afraid to get crazier with the melodies and the synth sounds attached to the melodies.....just my opinion

  On 9/1/2010 at 2:09 AM, Atop said:

I like the drums alright, feel like they should change a bit more and I like the hit sounds but the melodies really aren't that great, don't be afraid to get crazier with the melodies and the synth sounds attached to the melodies.....just my opinion

Thanks for the listen man, glad you liked the drums, yeah i do need to maybe expand my melodic ideas a bit. Would you put this on an album? cheers

I would put it on a record if you slowed the tempo down a little on the rhythm and took out all of melody and replaced it with a slow ambient melody and added a minimal/quiet bass part....but that is me, otherwise no, sorry

  On 9/1/2010 at 4:19 AM, Atop said:

I would put it on a record if you slowed the tempo down a little on the rhythm and took out all of melody and replaced it with a slow ambient melody and added a minimal/quiet bass part....but that is me, otherwise no, sorry

Thanks for the feedback man, that gives me an idea for a remix.

Anyone like the track at all? where could i improve? thanks

Good funky idea, but the BD should have a more kicking sound and I feel the bassline could be more inventive for my taste. I also think the bassline is the wrong way around, i.e. doesn't really start on the One but should.