Guest Adam Posted September 8, 2010 Report Share Posted September 8, 2010 Feedback is apreciated. :) http://soundcloud.com/adambeker/sun Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht tne Posted September 9, 2010 Report Share Posted September 9, 2010 if it was me i would speed it up and make it longer but it's pretty cool now so carry on my wayward son Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1411649 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted September 9, 2010 Report Share Posted September 9, 2010 On 9/9/2010 at 12:00 AM, tht tne said: if it was me i would speed it up and make it longer but it's pretty cool now so carry on my wayward son Shit' i thought it's too long. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1412047 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 Hey come on. Tell me what you think. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1412889 Share on other sites More sharing options...
luke viia Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 I like your style. This is good. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide luke viia's signature Hide all signatures GHOST: have you killed Claudius yet HAMLET: no GHOST: why HAMLET: fuck you is why im going to the cemetery to touch skulls [planet of dinosaurs - the album [bc] [archive]] Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1412920 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 (edited) Thanks. I dig your tracks too. Especially Tomahawk Prophecy. Edited September 11, 2010 by Adam Beker Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1413452 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soloman Tump Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 I quite like this, I suppose in a way it reminds me of Hud-Mo which is surely a good thing, I like the beats. I dont think it needs speeding up at all. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Soloman Tump's signature Hide all signatures https://intrusivesignals.blogspot.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1413491 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 cool track. i don't dig the structure though. the part from 1:45 to 2:15 doesn't add anything, should be removed imo. the ending melody isn't quite good and it all gets too repetitive. maybe you should play the chords by another synth, change to some crispier mood or something, play the melody with a sine and add some more variations :) just throwing ideas though it's not my track ;) what did you use for this? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1413617 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 On 9/11/2010 at 7:50 PM, yanG said: cool track. i don't dig the structure though. the part from 1:45 to 2:15 doesn't add anything, should be removed imo. Hmm I don't think it should be removed, i like that part. Quote the ending melody isn't quite good and it all gets too repetitive. maybe you should play the chords by another synth, change to some crispier mood or something, play the melody with a sine and add some more variations :) just throwing ideas though it's not my track ;) Yeah, you're are absolutely right here. I was working on this track yesterday, tried to fix mixing a bit and removed the melody at the end because i recognized it's annoying. Don't know what to add to the end though, changing a synth is maybe a good idea. maybe i'll fix it later today. Thanks for advices. Quote what did you use for this? This, this and this but i really hope to change this soon Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1413639 Share on other sites More sharing options...
luke viia Posted September 13, 2010 Report Share Posted September 13, 2010 On 9/11/2010 at 12:39 PM, Adam Beker said: Thanks. I dig your tracks too. Especially Tomahawk Prophecy. thanks =] i enjoyed all the stuff on your SC page, keep bringing the spacefunk sir. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide luke viia's signature Hide all signatures GHOST: have you killed Claudius yet HAMLET: no GHOST: why HAMLET: fuck you is why im going to the cemetery to touch skulls [planet of dinosaurs - the album [bc] [archive]] Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1414532 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ranky Redlof Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 nice track Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1415121 Share on other sites More sharing options...
encym Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 I like it. The drum elements could be more in-your-face and dynamic. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide encym's signature Hide all signatures www.encym.net https://neotantra.bandcamp.com/album/music-for-meditation Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1415276 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Thank you all for listening and commenting. I'll try to finish this after three weeks when i'll come back from holidays. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1415545 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Oh yeah, I already listened to this and though it was fucking sexy. Forgot to tell you though. It's fucking sexy. teach me how to programme drums please. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide chassis's signature Hide all signatures Reveal hidden contents Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1415558 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 On 9/14/2010 at 9:38 PM, chassis said: Oh yeah, I already listened to this and though it was fucking sexy. Forgot to tell you though. It's fucking sexy. teach me how to programme drums please. haha, thanks a lot! Don't know about drums. never thought about it. one track kick, another track snare and another 2 or 3 tracks of some semi-random percusions,hats and stuff like that. everything is compressed very strongly. usually i add distortion or bitchrusher or amp emulator,and reverb or stereo enhancer or chorus. at the end of effects chain always is compressor. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1415596 Share on other sites More sharing options...
funkaholic Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 i like this, i agree with feltchers comment about speeding up, also near the end when the glidey synth comes in could come in sooner, the song could be cut down a minute shorter i reckon. i also think it may need something to make the end a bit grander, maybe some crashes, something a naff but in a tasteful way. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/59499-new-track/#findComment-1415605 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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