New track.

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if it was me i would speed it up and make it longer but it's pretty cool now so carry on my wayward son

  On 9/9/2010 at 12:00 AM, tht tne said:

if it was me i would speed it up and make it longer but it's pretty cool now so carry on my wayward son

Shit' i thought it's too long.

Hey come on. Tell me what you think.

I like your style. This is good.

Thanks. I dig your tracks too. Especially Tomahawk Prophecy.

I quite like this, I suppose in a way it reminds me of Hud-Mo which is surely a good thing, I like the beats. I dont think it needs speeding up at all.

cool track. i don't dig the structure though. the part from 1:45 to 2:15 doesn't add anything, should be removed imo. the ending melody isn't quite good and it all gets too repetitive. maybe you should play the chords by another synth, change to some crispier mood or something, play the melody with a sine and add some more variations :) just throwing ideas though it's not my track ;)

what did you use for this?

  On 9/11/2010 at 7:50 PM, yanG said:

cool track. i don't dig the structure though. the part from 1:45 to 2:15 doesn't add anything, should be removed imo.

Hmm I don't think it should be removed, i like that part.

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the ending melody isn't quite good and it all gets too repetitive. maybe you should play the chords by another synth, change to some crispier mood or something, play the melody with a sine and add some more variations :) just throwing ideas though it's not my track ;)

Yeah, you're are absolutely right here. I was working on this track yesterday, tried to fix mixing a bit and removed the melody at the end because i recognized it's annoying. Don't know what to add to the end though, changing a synth is maybe a good idea. maybe i'll fix it later today. Thanks for advices.

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what did you use for this?

This,

this

and this but i really hope to change this soon

  On 9/11/2010 at 12:39 PM, Adam Beker said:

Thanks. I dig your tracks too. Especially Tomahawk Prophecy.

thanks =]

i enjoyed all the stuff on your SC page, keep bringing the spacefunk sir.

nice track

I like it. The drum elements could be more in-your-face and dynamic.

Thank you all for listening and commenting. I'll try to finish this after three weeks when i'll come back from holidays.

Oh yeah, I already listened to this and though it was fucking sexy. Forgot to tell you though.

It's fucking sexy.

teach me how to programme drums please.

  On 9/14/2010 at 9:38 PM, chassis said:

Oh yeah, I already listened to this and though it was fucking sexy. Forgot to tell you though.

 

It's fucking sexy.

 

teach me how to programme drums please.

haha, thanks a lot! Don't know about drums. never thought about it. one track kick, another track snare and another 2 or 3 tracks of some semi-random percusions,hats and stuff like that. everything is compressed very strongly. usually i add distortion or bitchrusher or amp emulator,and reverb or stereo enhancer or chorus. at the end of effects chain always is compressor.

i like this, i agree with feltchers comment about speeding up, also near the end when the glidey synth comes in could come in sooner, the song could be cut down a minute shorter i reckon. i also think it may need something to make the end a bit grander, maybe some crashes, something a naff but in a tasteful way.