Melodic/Industrial-ish track

Here's my latest piece I'm working on. It's still a work in process, as some of the transitions are a little rough and parts are repetitive. I also wanna add vocals. Please listen, comment/critique :)

http://soundcloud.com/android_402/lungs-fill

I like the atmosphere of the track a whole lot. It gets extremely interesting at around 3.20 and towards the end. Nice job.

agree it's repetitive but glad you plan to fix it. other than that the track's got something. don't ruin it with the vocals! ;)

It's very similar to this at the beginning.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oPFM3DUVT-8

But i really like it, mostly from 0.18 to 1.35 and at 2.20. Just maybe it's too long isn't it?

it sounds great. would love to hear it on a bigger sound system. Drums around 1:55 are a bit muddy, but

it doesn't bother me. I hoped to hear some heavily distorted acoustic drum sequences, but that was just

a metaller in me hungry for some blast beats.

Wicked track!

Very nice production although the strings that come in at 3:20 sound very midi-ish.

Also, the break at 3:02 could very well be twice as long just to build up the suspense

it's a trip it's got a funky beat and i can bug out to it

Thanks guys. Here's another piece I've recently finished. More piano driven and softer than the first track.

http://soundcloud.com/android_402/piano-dust

really like both of these, especially piano dust. that was great.

^ i can visualize this as part of a soundtrack for a very dramatic movie

This is very, very dope. Good everything. A+, keep it up.