Back With a notha track

NO ONE LIKE ME!!!!! I MEAN NO ONE LIKES IT!!! :angry:

i liked the first synths but the beat is terrible imo, if you wanna go classic you have to be brilliant cause everybody's been making this already, with more talent. you NEED to get rid of the singing, it's shit. actually before the voice enters it could be a good short thing inside a track, a bridge or something. it's just not a standalone.

my two pence.

Something about everything about you has me imagining you as a very young child.

That I am old chap and thanks for the input YanG. I personally like my cliche beat and my vocals (Could add variation to it). Yeah I suppose what I do is pretty common but I barely make tracks and I got to start somewhere, I like to think I'm progressing in terms of track quality and skill ergo why I post my shit to see how I stand with guys like yall.