hokum Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 take two http://soundcloud.com/easementh/sea-saw-wave Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/60709-new-tune/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dancing Brain Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 i miss a deeper aesthetic dimension in your track it seems that you were just focused on the flow of the groove without creating a sonical bridge wich has some effect to the listeners subconscious but of course a little cute dreamy tune so i can´t say it complete bad but there is really much still missing here + + + (highest: 10) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/60709-new-tune/#findComment-1440661 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 2nd take is my favourite by far. Kinda ends pretty abruptly. Needs to be longer an develop more of a flow. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide chassis's signature Hide all signatures Reveal hidden contents Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/60709-new-tune/#findComment-1440670 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted October 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2010 (edited) rad feedback. Im all over that sub layer that appeals to the brain... That first one was so so overworked and i lost track of the underlying unity... i didnt think any one would like the take two" (seasawwave?)... track and jsut tossed it in... glad i did though. Thankles tou yours bothe! Edited October 20, 2010 by hokum/easementh Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/60709-new-tune/#findComment-1440754 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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