new tune

take two

http://soundcloud.com/easementh/sea-saw-wave

i miss a deeper aesthetic dimension in your track it seems that you were just focused on the flow of the groove without creating a sonical bridge wich has some effect to the listeners subconscious but of course a little cute dreamy tune so i can´t say it complete bad but there is really much still missing here

+ + + (highest: 10)

2nd take is my favourite by far. Kinda ends pretty abruptly. Needs to be longer an develop more of a flow.

rad feedback. Im all over that sub layer that appeals to the brain... That first one was so so overworked and i lost track of the underlying unity... i didnt think any one would like the take two" (seasawwave?)... track and jsut tossed it in... glad i did though. Thankles tou yours bothe!