my new triphop/idm/BoC style tune

[soundcloud]<object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F6448674&secret_url=false"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F6448674&secret_url=false" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/nsputnik/nazca-lines">Nazca Lines</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/nsputnik">N.Sputnik</a></span> [/soundcloud]

  On 10/29/2010 at 2:36 AM, nsputnik said:

http://soundcloud.com/nsputnik/nazca-lines

it's nice, but i would like if you focused on the "pretty" aspects more... the bassline is kinda obnoxious

Thank. How did you get the embed code to work tht tne?

  On 10/29/2010 at 2:43 AM, nsputnik said:

Thank. How did you get the embed code to work tht tne?

<media>url</media> but replace the angle brackets <> with square brackets []

is this still a work in progress? i like it... you may benefit from going up in the scale earlier like in 3:28ish section... 5 + minutes is a long time to not have a constant build to the peak.,,,, also throw those vocal samples in at the intro.

Yeah I thought it wasn't too bad myself. It kinda reminded me a bit of Fieldtriqp melancholy tunes. I would say it could probably do with a bit more sheen in the hi end and also a bit more music development.

Anyways feel free to comment on my tune here. http://forum.watmm.com/topic/60956-did-a-remix-of-my-girlfriends-tune/

  On 10/29/2010 at 1:59 PM, Promo said:

Yeah I thought it wasn't too bad myself. It kinda reminded me a bit of Fieldtriqp melancholy tunes. I would say it could probably do with a bit more sheen in the hi end and also a bit more music development.

 

Anyways feel free to comment on my tune here. http://forum.watmm.com/topic/60956-did-a-remix-of-my-girlfriends-tune/

Sounds nice!

  On 10/29/2010 at 2:06 PM, encym said:

  On 10/29/2010 at 1:59 PM, Promo said:

Yeah I thought it wasn't too bad myself. It kinda reminded me a bit of Fieldtriqp melancholy tunes. I would say it could probably do with a bit more sheen in the hi end and also a bit more music development.

 

Anyways feel free to comment on my tune here. http://forum.watmm.com/topic/60956-did-a-remix-of-my-girlfriends-tune/

 

Sounds nice!

Coolio. Feel free to put a comment Youtube. ;-)

Thanks for the feedback, everyone.

  On 10/29/2010 at 5:10 AM, hokum/easementh said:

is this still a work in progress? i like it... you may benefit from going up in the scale earlier like in 3:28ish section... 5 + minutes is a long time to not have a constant build to the peak.,,,, also throw those vocal samples in at the intro.

Thanks for the suggestion. I wanted it to progress slowly. It is a finished mix for the most part. I could still go back and do another mix and arrangement. Not committing to to vinyl yet.