Guest blag Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 (edited) http://soundcloud.com/willman852/unfinished-ravey-track Impressions? Criticisms? Ideas as to where I can take it? Edited November 9, 2010 by blag Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/61284-i-never-know-what-to-put-in-these-things/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest blag Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 This is in the wrong forum. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/61284-i-never-know-what-to-put-in-these-things/#findComment-1453542 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gritbox Posted November 10, 2010 Report Share Posted November 10, 2010 too much high pitched stuff that goes on for too long. I think that synth lead that sort of sounds like a drowned out orch hit should go run through a low pass filter. I like the bassy bits and drums. The drums could use a little compression to make them more distinct too imo. I like how playful it sounds though and that its not completely predictable. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/61284-i-never-know-what-to-put-in-these-things/#findComment-1453809 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 the beat and the bass line is nice, but the melody totally loses me. There's not really any kind of aesthetic or pattern making it cohesive. I think the phrasing and structure can also use some work. The sounds and atmosphere is fine. The mix is not the major issue to be paying attention to. Also what is the break you've chopped here? I've been looking for that one. :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide ryancolecreate's signature Hide all signatures ------ dailyambient.com ------ New Ambient Music Every Day. New ambient album "Sun and Clouds" now out. Use the discount code watmmer for 50% off the $4 album.Check it out. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/61284-i-never-know-what-to-put-in-these-things/#findComment-1454859 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest blag Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 On 11/11/2010 at 5:41 PM, slightlydrybeans said: the beat and the bass line is nice, but the melody totally loses me. There's not really any kind of aesthetic or pattern making it cohesive. I think the phrasing and structure can also use some work. The sounds and atmosphere is fine. The mix is not the major issue to be paying attention to. Also what is the break you've chopped here? I've been looking for that one. :) Appreciating the comments :) I guess that I wanted a playful/jageddy melody, and that it started to sound cohesive enough to me after I've been listening to it for so long! I'm crap at that structure - something I really need to improve on but I don't know how. It just doesn't came naturally to me. I'm normally much more in intersted in textures. I got the break from here: http://www.zenhiser.com/products/Pure-Oldskool-Hardcore-Drum-Loops-04.html Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/61284-i-never-know-what-to-put-in-these-things/#findComment-1454948 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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