Bliss-Air listen to this !

hey guys, just finishes this track recently, some feedback would be great, how does it sound? too experimental? not experimental enough? Be great to get some feedback, thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/supernova41411/air-111

Defenently experimental and I thought it sounds intresting. I feel as if certain parts of the song hint to greater potentials if that makes sense but you didn't quite exploit them. Mainly one sound I didn't really enjoy but still sounded interesting and thats what you did with the first melody at the beginning that permeates through out the song. If I were to personally rate this I'd give it a 4/10 almost 5/10 on my scale of would I play this song again and did I like it. 10 would mean I can't stop listening 5 would mean I might give it a listen again tomorrow 1/10 being I'm not touching that song again.

Just my 2 cents and honest opinion.

thanks alot for the listen man, the fact that you nearly rate it a 5, which means u might possibly give it another listen means i did something right i guess lol. glad you found some parts interesting. cheers

  On 12/7/2010 at 2:27 AM, Quantum said:

hey guys, just finishes this track recently, some feedback would be great, how does it sound? too experimental? not experimental enough? Be great to get some feedback, thanks.

 

 

http://soundcloud.com/supernova41411/air-111

I like the frantic attitude, even though it's still a bit rough and could use some more ironing out in places.

  On 12/7/2010 at 11:33 AM, encym said:

  On 12/7/2010 at 2:27 AM, Quantum said:

hey guys, just finishes this track recently, some feedback would be great, how does it sound? too experimental? not experimental enough? Be great to get some feedback, thanks.

 

 

http://soundcloud.com/supernova41411/air-111

I like the frantic attitude, even though it's still a bit rough and could use some more ironing out in places.

thanks man, was trying to keep it fresh with enough ideas to keep attention, so it's cool you picked up on the frantic nature of the piece.

Yeah still a bit rough round the edges, that's why i brought it to you guys to see what you think needs done to finish it.

thanks again for the listen man

some more feedback would be great guys, cheers